definitely not one of my best but something i like....
Winter breeze blows, its chillness numb my face,
not the mind though, as thoughts in it race.
Sipping hot chocolate, covered in a blanket,
yet what keeps me warm is a thought of you…
I see the long tunnel and pitch dark falls.
I feel stranded; fear inside me crawls.
But then it shines, a light at the end.
I know I’d be fine, at the thought of you…
Sometimes in a solitary mood when the mind wanders.
A face here; a memory there; untiring it ponders.
Forgotten pasts, uncertain tomorrows, ah the joy and sorrows.
But always it makes me smile- a thought of you…
So many people I’ve seen, many faces I’ve known,
but a lot more faces have they shown.
Through all the hurt, I still have reason to believe;
a true face I see; with the thought of you…
Not long have I known you, not long may I stay,
but to my life you add a sparkle with every passing day.
They say true friends are rare; I know its true,
but I already have you-and I smile with every thought of you…
6 comments:
thou art so toughtful :P
I'm outta adjectives :|
Wher dya get de inspiration from,for such beautiful rhythmic verses?!n if dis aint ur best i cant help imagining wat thats gonna b like! here goes ur fiver :)
thankoo thankoo :)
i do like this one but sometimes i feel its err... the usual, amateur :p
bachoo bachoo kinds... but oh well if u say its good, who am i to disagree?? ;)
Hey MD superb.... i am with you for nearly four years....i no you write poems... but din''t no that it would be so awesome... good dear.....!!!!
thanks julie :)
see... im not as stupid as you think i am :P
i knew you'd like this one... your type of lovey dovey poem i guess :P
nice
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