The sun it shines upon you;
your marbled face, your still eyes.
You smile upon us; beautiful
calm, young and lovely your face
and you smile a happy smile.
The darkness fell in the empty alley.
You slept in peace, you dreamt
a dream of love and beauty.
A noise it sounded, loud and that light;
a light so bright, oh the fire and smoke.
And they built you, your marbled face;
the dream still in your eyes, and that smile,
the smile so happy, that lasted only a while
before the life like marble doll replaced
the life in you, O unfortunate innocence.
48 comments:
childhood and old age.. good poem.. innocent one indeed
the essence has been splendidly portrayed...nice poem...
Marbled face..aahhh!!..wonderfully brought up,baby!
ek baar acha..do baar acha..ab toh acha likhne ka aadat hi pad gaya hai tumko!:P
aweeeesome boss!
Divya,
Full of depth. Keep writing.
Take care
Marbled is it???? Well...well...nicely penned...good work...
kaise moti?? kaise likhti hai tu ye sab?? tere pass magic poetry potion hai na??
PS: disable word verification!!!!!!!!
wooooowwww !!!
verrryyyy nice likha hai!
Profound. Very.
Peace.
clap clap :) n hiiiiiii once again...was out 4 a while...
beautiful composition
applaude applaude!!
:)
speechless...
btw how have u been dear....take care n i shall be here more often
Whre've you been chup=ing? :P
lovely lines:)
Someone's done a *Houdini* again?
Trust all is well.
Peace.
Lovely verse,, Divya.. nifty lines.. :-)
Happy New Year to u and your family.. :-)
Beautiful Divya! I liked your blog-you are blogrolled:)
So beautifully haunting!Lovely poem dear :)
divvy disappeared again?? :P
i tht i commented on this...
u seem to be brilliant whenever u write... so write more na! :D
fantastic and awesome :)
Lovely poem....awesome....loved how you have described the forces have contributed in building the marble face....
Nice Post...!!
गाँधी जी की पुण्य-तिथि पर मेरी कविता "हे राम" का "शब्द सृजन की ओर" पर अवलोकन करें !आपके दो शब्द मुझे शक्ति देंगे !!!
thanks chriz!
thanks rahul.. visit again :)
@ crystal
oh i was hoping somebody would notice that! thank you :D
@ trinaa
hehe.. chadha rahi hai na ladki??
@ niceugy251
thank you sir :) will do!
@ rajesh
haven't seen you in a looooong time! pls dont forget me :(
@ swati
moti! potion piya bhi toh humne saath mein piya hai!! ;)
will do so!
@ HP
why does that sound like a nautanki comment?? *eyebrows raised*
@ kartz
thank you. very much.
chill!
;) :p
@ kochu
evidayirunnu ithrayum kaalam?
@ avinash
thank you :)
:) ..sure will
@ richa
thanks sis! =)
@ princess mia
hello!!! just been busy with this and that babe.. you've been doing the disappearing act of late.. sup?
@ crystal
mein aa gayi!! :D
@ comfortably numb
:)
@ kartz
hehe... and POP goes the weasel!!..
i am back again.. for the time being at least!
@ muZer
thank you honey :) happy new year to you too :)
@ Mithe
pleased :)
thnk you!
thanks sameera!:)
@ vinu
as long as i can, will do will do!
@ shravan
happy and thank you :)
@ alok
thanks buddy! was horrified by this young girl's corpse i saw in the paper.. made me think about this.
@ KK
thanks!
@ rahul
oh! you're already here :D
cool :)
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