I have no idea what was going through my mind when I wrote the following load of crap. But since it is Valentines day and I don't want to be behind the rest of the blogging world in writing something dripping with love and mush and insanity, (don't know about the first two but there's loads of the last one), here I present, what is to follow :P
You swim in a yellow candy floss sea.
You drench in a shower of confetti.
Under a merry green sky above,
the purple waters of the calmest sea
rise in tides and rain over the trees.
While the ice cold sun blazes black and blue,
it melts the rocks into sticky glue
that sticks to you and your muddled mind,
bringing close a world you want to be in
and the crazy world that wont let you in.
You smile at the kid who let the butterfly fly
and watch it zig zag up into the empty sky.
The clouds now they fill the voids above;
Your mind wanders onto things unknown.
And you, caught atop clouds of love,
Wonder, has sanity left you for good?
And with a slight shrug you walk away;
A blissful smile adorning your dreamy face.
photo courtesy: flickr.com
You swim in a yellow candy floss sea.
You drench in a shower of confetti.
Under a merry green sky above,
the purple waters of the calmest sea
rise in tides and rain over the trees.
While the ice cold sun blazes black and blue,
it melts the rocks into sticky glue
that sticks to you and your muddled mind,
bringing close a world you want to be in
and the crazy world that wont let you in.
You smile at the kid who let the butterfly fly
and watch it zig zag up into the empty sky.
The clouds now they fill the voids above;
Your mind wanders onto things unknown.
And you, caught atop clouds of love,
Wonder, has sanity left you for good?
And with a slight shrug you walk away;
A blissful smile adorning your dreamy face.
photo courtesy: flickr.com
37 comments:
Beautiful
Both poem and pic
:)
Loved 'em
yes,sanity has left me 4 gud n i'm in bliss now.lovely words here...
Happy Valentine's day in advance..
I would really want to be in love once to know about the losing sanity part..
Someone's being too humble. Crap? :P Huh!
Nice verse there buddy... Interview preparation hasnt hampered ur writing. ;)
V-Day greetings.
Peace.
tastic capture and lovely poem
Regards
really good work... best wishes!
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गुलाबी कोंपलें
Lovely and sweet poem!
really cute:)
thanks for sharing it with us!
Happy valentine's day!
u too??? siiiiigh.. :P
niiice poem..but i've seen u do better gal! :)
it wasnt insane :D
lovely and mushy yes :)
@ riversoul
thanks sid :)
@ anwesa
you're in love??? awww :)
@ sarath
thanks, wish you the same :)
hehe... i've heard ppl do.. i really don't know!
@ kartz
yeah well, it isn't great you know.. i mean, i just wrote what came to mind and posted it.
happy valentines day to you too :)
thanks avinash :)
thanks you vinay!
hey meera :)
thanks a lot.. happy v-day to you too babe :)
@ trinaa
yep i know :) but hey! i did warn you :P
oh i'm not getting any love, least i can do is write about it :P
@ richa
=D hee hee =D
"Wonder, has sanity left you for good?
And with a slight shrug you walk away;"
sooper-dooper-zooper !!!!
really touching and high quality liked it :)
AS
insanity...yet every sane mind wants to embrace it...wonder y...magic of love, I guess:)
Good work Divz...
You smile at the kid who let the butterfly fly
and watch it zig zag up into the empty sky.
My fav lines...Happy Valentines Day dear
Divya,
It is true that any person in love seems crazy to others. It is because that person is in own world most of the time.
Take care
:)
n daz my smiley...n im bak 2 yer blog after ages...(i hav turned into a rare species here in blogosphere....hectic schedules...)
i'm in luv with ur rhyme dear!!!
haye haye! that was written for me. ;)
boooohhooooooooo :P
hmm...must say gr8 post dear
harry
www.arenaoflife.blogspot.com
thanks tinni :)
@ HP
aye thanks ya! :p
@ AS
thank you :)
@ dinana
mine too actually :D
thanks babe.. hope you had a happy valentines day.
@ niceguy251
yep..i guess so.. that's what ppl tell me :P
@ kochu
finally!! thought you had forgotten my url :|
@ anwesa
hehe... thank you thank you =D
@ mandoos
aur kya??? sirf tere liye jaanu! :D :P
lol...yousuckprotonballs! hahahahah! :P
@ haritha
thanks :)
I donno which I liked better,the poem or the pic! :)
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